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The characters are pretty expressive, and I'm able to picture somewhat what's taking place in the scene. Overall though, shading and lighting could have used more work. Where is the light source coming from? I'll just make a guess. Judging from the background, it's coming from behind the further character, but highlights appears all over the place. The tops of the brick walls feel a bit incomplete in comparison to the rest of the walls due to the heavy textures. A sense of depth could also be worked in to make the picture better and more convincing. Shadows could also be applied more. Other than that, keep trying.
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